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Tuesday, June 1, 2010

Outline

"Unit 6: Initial Response

I found that with narrowing my thesis to Rheumatoid Arthritis and doing this outline that I needed to do a little more research. So here it goes...

1. Introduction
2. The causes of RA
a. What are the causes of RA and what symptoms are relative to this disease.
3. The symptoms of RA have caused a loss in every day productivity.
a. How does RA affect every day living?
4. The cost of having this disease.
a. doctors visits
b. medications
c. Therapy for depression
d. Does insurance help with a lot of this? (incorporate into paragraph since older adults are affected by this disease)
5. Conclusion

Before I typed this in I looked it over to make sure I didn't repeat myself and I reviewed all the body paragraphs to make sure they were related to the thesis.

Revised Thesis:

Rheumatoid Arthritis affects many aspects of life with all the symptoms and characteristics of this disease, the loss of productivity in every day living and the cost of living with this disease.

Please give me comments!"

*Jessica*
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  1. Jessica LewisJune 1, 2010 at 5:59 AM

    Please leave some comments on anything that shows to need improvement. I know my thesis probably still does so any help with that according to what is in my body paragraphs I would appreciate. Thank you everybody!

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